tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post3402534429886266459..comments2014-12-09T17:25:07.561-08:00Comments on Words and Images: Wrongful Interpretation of a Defender's Face - Ben CarlsonAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post-23230815050894755982011-09-27T16:30:38.672-07:002011-09-27T16:30:38.672-07:00What's good?
1) Your focus on the behavior o...What's good?<br /><br />1) Your focus on the behavior of the women. You could have done more here, especially by going into more detail about which woman is which, and their differences as well as their similarity.<br />2) While I was a little confused about whether it was your main argument, your intermittent focus on questioning the portrayal of Felix is good.<br /><br />What weaker?<br /><br />1) You needed more focus. #2 could definitely have been an effective essay, with more detail (especially from the text, but also to a detailed "reading" of Felix' face). #1 is also very interesting, but even less developed. Doing both together was at least something of a mistake.<br /><br />2) You repeat too much of what was said in class. You have your own things to say, but you waste space by repeating too much, and developing your own ideas too little.Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.com