tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post4334900644285474753..comments2014-12-09T17:25:07.561-08:00Comments on Words and Images: Crumb's Motivation for and Execution of Illustrating GenesisAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post-14572337254104120032014-11-21T15:23:12.415-08:002014-11-21T15:23:12.415-08:00Your proposal is very good, and needs little comme...Your proposal is very good, and needs little comment.<br /><br />"My possible thesis is: Crumb’s visual choices in illustrating Genesis were meant to undermine the traditional patriarchal interpretation of the book in favor of a more feminist viewpoint." This is a little standoffish. If we grant that you're right, why do we care? Are you backing Crumb because you support his interpretation? A little more visibility into your point of view - even if you have a strong focus on interpreting Crumb - will be useful, even if only at the ending.<br /><br />"If you feel that this is too similar to the arguments I have already made, I could do an in-depth analysis of the matriarchal aspect in Genesis, or even the Old Testament. This would deviate from the emphasis on Crumb and focus solely on how the feminist perspective differs from the traditional patriarchal viewpoint " If your reading of Crumb can be developed and extended substantially more, it's fine to keep that focus. But developing the essay partially through deeper research into the matriarchal aspects of Genesis would also be legitimate, and if you grow less certain of how you can develop it further, that expanded research would certainly be useful.Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post-4423330986797395652014-11-16T21:13:53.344-08:002014-11-16T21:13:53.344-08:00You have such an interesting blog. Thanks for shar...You have such an interesting blog. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading your posts. All the best for your future blogging journey. Sridhar Chandrasekaranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01721452527795471802noreply@blogger.com