tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post8337945548874471781..comments2014-12-09T17:25:07.561-08:00Comments on Words and Images: Icon vs. Reality: The Triangle ChartAdamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5888438300076664400.post-85318909465640726222011-10-02T10:03:44.149-07:002011-10-02T10:03:44.149-07:00Dealing with McCloud's triangle *and* with his...Dealing with McCloud's triangle *and* with his ideas about faces and how they work is simply too much for one essay of this length. It would have been better to pick one or the other. This is especially the case when you consider that three paragraph in you haven't said anything specific about any page in the book...<br /><br />The fourth paragraph begins to say something about specific images, but it's muddled - it's too short, and it's unclear to me what images you're even talking about, other than the initial one where the girl is turning away from the mirror.<br /><br />The fifth paragraph, again, doesn't actually do any work.<br /><br />Overall: You need an argument which says something particular about some image/moment in the text. If you're having trouble finding something to say, begin with an image (or a passage) - never begin by as broadly as you do here without a clear direction.Adamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16302919444091859459noreply@blogger.com