A dark and leafless
tree snakes its way up the rightmost edge of a large number of Blake’s poems in
Songs of Experience. Beneath the
tree, repeated again and again, a human body – suffering or dead. We are introduced to a much darker side of
Blake’s poetry, and this dark mood is echoed in the images surrounding each
poem. With almost identical imagery, The
Human Abstract and Holy Thursday
use the tree to show the darker side of the human mind, and the condition in which
it leaves the human body.
To analyze this
repeated image – a tree hanging over a human body – we can look at it first in
its two parts. The tree can really be understood when looked at in conjunction
with The Human Abstract. The poem
puts human behavior and intention under a microscope. Blake looks at the good
that humanity has done while showing us that pity and mercy only come from
inequality of wealth and happiness, and that “mutual fear brings peace.” As the
poem goes on, we are introduced to the metaphor of a growing tree, which “bears
the fruit of deceit” and is home to Ravens, a bird often representative of
death. This tree, however, is not natural, as Blake points out in his final
stanza. This tree instead “grows… in the Human Brain.” The image surrounding
this poem features most prominently an old man, perhaps growing from the ground
to represent this human tree of immorality and deceit. I think we should
instead look to the ‘natural’ tree on the right side of the painting. This tree
looms over the old man ominously. It seems to be hidden off to the side, and
could be overlooked, but this is the tree that Blake speaks of. With its
leafless branches, the hidden evils of human nature are represented in this
tree. This idea makes the text seem even more sinister. If the tree represents humanity,
it can escape unnoticed, as the truth behind human nature is in the poem,
hidden behind peace and mercy. It also shows that this evil is perhaps more
powerful than man: it grows above men’s heads, extending its reach further and
further.
The tree is
repeated in Holy Thursday, and after
looking back at that poem in the context of The
Human Abstract, we can better understand why this tree is present, looming
over a mother and her lifeless child. This poem is focused on the injustice
Blake observes in the world around him. People prosper and grow “in a rich and
fruitful land,” yet are surrounded by poverty. The dichotomy of these two
worlds coexisting can be brought back to the tree that stands again on the
right side of Blake’s painting. This tree, representing the innate evil of
human existence, gives new meaning to the poem: it tells us that the tragedy
the poem describes is borne from man. This physical representation of the human
mind looms over the sadness we see in the painting, and so we are given the
idea that it is the human mind that has created and maintained this world of
inequality and “eternal winter.”
The tree, however,
is never painted alone. In both The Human
Abstract and Holy Thursday, it is
over a human body that this tree stands. The
Human Abstract, as mentioned earlier, features a man tied to the ground.
While I argued that he does not represent the nature of humanity, the subject
of the poem, he is representative of humanity itself. This old man is trapped,
his body a slave to the ideals represented in the tree. His ropes are tied
beneath the ground, to the roots of the tree, the basis of humanity’s wrathful nature.
The tying of the human mind to the human body shows the consequences of evil
within the mind: the evil can be transferred to the body – the mechanism of
human action – where it can create a world that represents the human mind. Holy Thursday depicts not the body of an
old man suffering, but that of a small child, dead beneath the tree of human creation.
The world created by the human mind has claimed a victim in the form of this
young boy. This serves as a metaphor in another way as well: humanity’s flaws,
often put into action by those with experience of the world (represented by the
old man tied to the tree) rain death upon the innocent. A small, naked boy is
pained under the tree – the epitome of innocence and childhood. His world, full
of the poverty and hunger created by humanity, has taken his innocence and his
life. Not only does the tree of human error slay men, it slays their innocence
by bringing them into the ways of deceit and evil.
Your intro is excellent. Maybe you exaggerate how similar the two images are, though? I like it a lot, but there's a danger here of overstating the case.
ReplyDeleteI struggle a little with your reading of the tree itself. For instance, I don't understand how you interpret its leaflessness. The notes to our edition say that the "old man" is really Urizen, Blake's name for the creator (remember all my talk about gnosticism?). I'm not saying that your interpretation is wrong, or even that contradictory - but if you revised it would be really interesting to look into how other people have interpreted this image & why. I like your reading of why the tree towers, incidentally.
A lot of the material here impressed me greatly. "The tying of the human mind to the human body shows the consequences of evil within the mind: the evil can be transferred to the body – the mechanism of human action – where it can create a world that represents the human mind. Holy Thursday depicts not the body of an old man suffering, but that of a small child, dead beneath the tree of human creation. The world created by the human mind has claimed a victim in the form of this young boy." -- this is a complex and compelling reading. Your organization is a little awkward, especially your paragraph structure - the paragraph I'm quoting from in particular could have been split - and I'd like to see you use the text a little more. I can't believe I'm even saying that, since most people struggle more to use the imagery, but you're actually a little the other way - I guess what I'm saying is that you've got the repeating imagery nailed, but in a rather speculative way that could be pinned down a little with more use of the text.
Thoughts for revision - look into other interpretations, particularly the one our notes mention; figure out the contrast between trees in Songs of Innocence and Songs of Experience (there are two important trees in Eden...), or simply fine-tune your argument to make more balanced use of the text of the poems themselves, to further explore how the repeating image relates to the texts.
Very well written analysis of Blake and the various ways darkness can be spotted in his poems. The part written about The Human Abstract included a lot of good points about the tree bearing the fruit of deceit and how the tree is not a natural thing. There could have been a little more expanded writing in the Holy Thursday section. I am sorry about not posting much, your response to the prompt was well written and should be considered for one of your revisions.
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