The United States
was founded on the ideals of opportunity, equality, and progress. The
progression from settlement to revolution to expansion in America presents a
powerful picture of America in 1929. The history of America presented to us
here is shown to create a romantic and promising environment that contrasts
with the rest of the story, as the American dream and its promise of
opportunity crumbles in the wake of the great depression. The ideas of dreams
verses reality and outward appearance verses internal turmoil are woven into
the stories of the girl, the boy, and the elderly gentlemen as they navigate
the depression and the failing American dream.
A ship sailing
towards a star on the horizon, patriots fighting for freedom, the building of
railroads, towns and cities. These images all represent parts of the American
dream. The history of America is about building up, expanding westward, and
living in a reality where a group of patriots can defeat the most powerful
empire in the world. From the perspective of Lynd Ward’s characters, they can
go nowhere but up. The snapshots of American history that Lynd Ward presents
are not only to show us the environment of prosperity in the 20s, but the
mentality of the characters that live there. As the boy and girl have their
fortunes told, they see their dreams coming true in the crystal ball. The hope
they have for the future is shown as magical, far removed from the reality they
will have to face. By showing us their view of the world and the country they
live in, we are able to better see the emotion and turmoil they face when the
30s hit. We are able to see that the depression was not only a difficult time,
but was a complete surprise. The ideals of the American dream were a reality to
them, and they truly believed all they wanted was attainable.
The
story of the boy and the girl represents the idea of dreams verses reality that
is introduced with the short but powerful history of the United States. Nothing
shows this contrast more than their trip to the carnival together. The
happiness and dreamlike quality to their excursion as they ride the rides,
dance, and fall in love shows their innocence just before the novel dives deep
into the depression a few images later. The trip is cut short by a rainstorm
and a vivid image of lightning cutting across the sky. The final image of the
1929 section and their trip to the carnival shows the boy and girl under cover
from the rain as everyone scrambles to escape. The metaphor presented in this
image gives a preview of the next section, as everyone will try to escape or
hide from the struggles of poverty. The real contrast with the carnival scene,
however, is the final image of the novel: the boy scrapes together money to
take his fiancée back to the carnival, but the stark contrast in the mood shows
the change the depression has brought down upon the couple. The American dream
is dead, and the couple rides a roller coaster together, holding onto each
other. The emotion in the boy’s face shows only fear as he seems to look back
on their time together and realize that while their dreams once seemed not only
attainable but inevitable, only uncertainty remains.
While the history of America was
representative of the disillusionment of the American dream, it also played
into the theme of appearance verses reality. The success and progress of the
United States was reaching its tipping point as the thirties approached,
despite the fact that the roaring twenties kept up all appearances. This idea
is best embodied by the elderly gentleman, who runs a cutthroat business as he
cuts pay, leaves many jobless, and crosses ethical lines to control his
employees and the union they form. His success in business, however, starkly
contrasts with the reality of his physical health. Over the year during which
his part of the story takes place, the man inches closer and closer to his
death. He relies completely on his caretaker, and despite his outward
appearances as a power-hungry CEO, he is a lonely man, weakening as the year
goes on and as his company struggles in the depression. The contrast can be
seen most clearly if we look at the images in the months of July and August. In
July, the old man fights the union: he calls in the government, setting off a
violent series of images as the union clashes with armed guards. The power
position this old man holds is clearly demonstrated, in a very vivid way.
August, however, sets a completely different tone. In every image we see how
weak this man has become. He falls and cannot rise without help. He is bedridden. The final image of the month features an hourglass, as if counting
down to his death.
The
American dream is presented to the reader in a series of images showing the
United States’ proud and patriotic history. Over the course of the story, we
see that this dream serves as a foil for the depression. The progress of the
United States is brought to a halt, and the characters’ hopeful dreams for the
future are left behind as they try to hold their lives together and remain as
they once were.
You make a great argument that the images of the boy and girl show how their perspectives are not in reality. Because of what they had that one night at the carnival has made them believe in a dream that no longer fits into the cold realness of the 30's. A suggestion I would make is to pull more detail out of the images to support what you're saying. For example, you talked about the ship picture and the revolution, but how exactly do these images prove what your point through their detail? When you brought up the picture of the roller coaster, I agreed that it symbolizes the ups and downs of a chaotic life and they are holding on to each other for safety, while the boy has an expression of terror. Try to pull more specifics like these out of the other images you referenced in the essay.
ReplyDeleteI also like the argument that the old gentleman's failing health contrasts with his mode of operation in his business. This could also be tied back to the brief history in the 1929 section. I could see how his failing health is symbolized by the industry and pollution that is taking hold of America in some of the later images of the history, as if America itself is becoming sick as it heads towards the Depression.
ReplyDeleteWas the US really "founded on the ideals of opportunity, equality, and progress?" Arguing from that point of view is fine, but it's really by no means obvious - it's something that you should justify if it's important, or cut if it isn't. Overall, I don't really see a clear argument in the first paragraph - there's nothing which is really both focused and provable here. Your 2nd paragraph is much better, yet it's still basically introductory material - you should have cut the 1st paragraph entirely *and* trimmed the 2nd paragraph down while more clearly presenting your main argument.
You come close to a clear argument in the third paragraph, when you return to the 2nd scene at the carnival. You have all the right material here - the issue is the lack of a clear statement, especially at the beginning, of what your'e trying to prove by showing that the way the carnival is presented has changed.
The discussion of appearances vs. reality is ok by itself, but it feels like you're making 2 arguments rather than focusing and clarifying a single argument. By showing that the return to the carnival is a resolution of the gap between appearances and reality you might make it all work together, but you're not doing that yet.
Overall: you're trying to do too much, with too much filler. The American Dream is a big topic; making it narrower by exploring the meaning of the carnival and how its portrayal changes is a good one, but you needed to bring together and focus all of your threads more, ideally through an even closer analysis of the carnival.