In Ward’s Jimmy Corrigan, he chooses to emphasize two different centuries,
one of current time and the other of Jimmy’s grandfather and great
grandfather. Ward emphasizes these two
time periods to emphasize the stagnation of the developing United States. In the more recent century, Jimmy faces
consequences that revolve around his family, mostly his father. One century prior, Jimmy’s grandfather faces
similar problems with his own father.
The reoccurring paternal complications in the Corrigan family shows
Ward’s belief that even though time and events are constantly changing, the
underlying dilemma of the United States stays the same.
The prime
example of Ward’s belief about the history of the United States is through the
male gender in general. Ward chooses to
display Jimmy’s family consequences through male relationships because it is
the men of the United States who ultimately started the country. The fact that the males in the Corrigan
family all share the same name shows how men of the later generation are no different
than the men of the earlier generation.
Jimmy’s great grandfather leaves his female companion just as Jimmy’s
father leaves Jimmy’s mother. These
reoccurring actions a century apart show the country’s inability to change
despite the technological progresses. This
further shows the greed of mankind because the men would rather please
themselves than learn from their mistakes to benefit their family.
Ward also
argues about the greed permanently displayed by the country through the
relationship between man and woman. In a
flashback section, the hand of a female statue falls off within the process of
developing a new city. The rough
handling of this statue shows the materialistic property that men attribute to
women. The fact that Jimmy’s great
grandfather gives the broken off hand to Jimmy’s grandfather shows a quite
literal passing down of these damaged opinions.
In another flashback, Jimmy’s great grandfather leaves money for his ex
partner before moving to a completely different state while she remains asleep,
without a warning. The lack of opinion
that members of the Corrigan family give to the females in their lives show’s
Ward’s emphasis on masculine identity and therefore the greed displayed by men
alone. The females that are taken
advantage of in this comic are all victims of greed.
The final
argument that Ward makes is through Jimmy himself. Ward depicts Jimmy to be the first male who
is different than his precedents. He
lacks skills with communication that the other members of his family seem to
possess and simply cannot communicate with girls. He even struggles to communicate with his
mother, who shoves communication down his throat. Jimmy is the first male in his family to be
raised by his mother, and not his father, unlike his ancestors. The fact that Jimmy appears slow and is
raised by a female character rather than a male shows Ward’s opinion that the country
needs to be ruled by men. In the
introduction in the very beginning of the comic, there is an exam section with
the first question asking about the gender of the person taking the exam. If the person chooses, female, they are
instructed to stop. Although this quiz
is rather humorous, it still hints at the fact that the comic is not meant for
female readers due to the complex content and certain offensive sections. Ward believes men are better suited to
understand the content and therefore a better candidate to control the country.
Overall,
Ward is arguing that men and greed have run the history of the United States
and men need to continue to run the country.
While I do agree with Ward’s argument that mankind tends to run off of
greed, I oppose his argument when it comes to the need for men to run the
country. Greed has been impacting the
history of places all over the world as soon as a place develops a sense of
currency. The desire to obtain countless
luxuries and be wealthy is a dream that many Americans possess and that desire
will never fade away until a person develops a good sense of morals. Many people do not even reach that point in
their life because they think that money will make them happy.
To this day, men and women still
are not seen as equals. Differences in
pay still exist and when it comes to sexual assault, women are taught to dress
appropriately so they will not get raped rather than men being instructed not
to rape. There are plenty of women in
the United States who possess the ability to run a household and a country
because they have the necessary social skills and intelligence that men
possess. The main problem with the
United States throughout its history is the people who refuse to change. When Barack Obama was elected president in
the most recent election, many people became upset just because a white male
was no longer president. Some people are
still trying to prove that he does not meet the qualifications to be president.
All the difficulties that the country encounters are immediately blamed on him
even though he is making decisions to the best of his ability, not to mention
that others would probably react similarly.
The bigoted nature of the inhabitants of this country is the reason why
it is not changing. Ward emphasizes this
through the similarity between the two different time periods occurring
throughout the comic.
Your interpretation of Ward's writing definitely shows the characters in a new way. You argue that Jimmy is a character created to show what Ward sees as failed masculinity. He is not like his father and great-grandfather with his treatment of women (his grandfather may have been like him though, we don't know yet). Yet Ward does give Jimmy a kind of masculinity -- he certainly thinks about women a lot and has a lifelong idol of superman as the ultimate picture of manliness. Jimmy may have character flaws and some development issues, but it's not perfectly clear from your argument that Ward created him just to show that more masculine men should be in charge. You should use more evidence showing the problems Jimmy exhibits rather than just say he's "slow." You also talk in your introduction about the parallels between the relationships of sons and fathers, the later in the essay emphasize the differences between Jimmy and the other men in his family. Maybe make it clear in your thesis that your argument will contrast Jimmy with others rather than show similarities.
ReplyDeleteI also think you need more textual/visual evidence to support your argument about monetary greed. You certainly use scenes from the book to put emphasis on the poor treatment of women, but switch to an argument about greed for luxuries and money that just doesn't seem to be prevalent in the book so far. If you're talking about the greed of men, maybe just focus on the side of your argument that talks about interaction with women -- you have evidence for that.
Finally, your last paragraph is about the refusal of Americans today to change their opinions. The book uses a lot of symbols to show the translation from the 1890s to the technology of the 1980s. While there is change here, you should find a way to tie your argument in with the book, using more evidence to show that the changes of modernity are not the same as the changes in people. Using the book more in your final paragraph would help better get across your argument and focus it more on Ward rather than an argument about the country as a whole.
The intro seems good with one caveat - what is “the underlying dilemma of the United States?” As I read, I get the general point that it has something to do with men and selfishness - but you’re a little vague. I like your reading of the hand in particular, although I wonder why you don’t have anything to say about the context of the statue & its general appearance.
ReplyDelete“The fact that Jimmy appears slow and is raised by a female character rather than a male shows Ward’s opinion that the country needs to be ruled by men. In the introduction in the very beginning of the comic, there is an exam section with the first question asking about the gender of the person taking the exam. If the person chooses, female, they are instructed to stop. Although this quiz is rather humorous, it still hints at the fact that the comic is not meant for female readers due to the complex content and certain offensive sections. Ward believes men are better suited to understand the content and therefore a better candidate to control the country.” -- This reading of the satirical material in the introductions seems simplistic. More importantly, you needed to get at why you think (in Ware’s view) being raised by a woman rather than by a man makes his problems worse than his father’s and grandfather’s problems. I’m grant you it is one difference between him and them - but it’s a big jump from there to arguing that Ware thinks the country should be run by men (does he admire the masculine America of the “good old days?” That’s a hard case to make). I’m not saying that it’s impossible, just that you needed to get into the details.
As we get to the end, I think you’re shifting your ground. Is Ware in favor of or opposed to male dominance? In favor of or opposed to change? What is the “real” source, if any, of Jimmy’s problems? Your position is unclear & shifting, and your evidence is thin - you needed to focus more directly on the book itself (as you did with the statue - that was the best part).
Ellen gives a lot of great, detailed feedback - it's all worth attending to.