If “Songs of Innocence” describe a
peaceful and nice world picture, “Songs of Experience’ would be a picture of
ironic and cynic. Blake finished the transformation of his mind --- the happy
singer did not exist anymore, but the wisdom poet showed up. He used his experience
and cynical attitude told people what the real world looked like. In the “Songs
of Experience”, the sun never light anymore, the field becomes desert, and the
relationship between people is cold and detached. I can see the real world in
Blake’s eyes. If the “Songs of Innocence” was the Utopia that Blake made for us
to go for it, the “Songs of Experience” would be the purgatory we are
undergoing now.
The first one I want to discuss is “The
Sick Rose”. Blake described an invisible worm tired to find a sick rose in a howling
storm night in the first section. It made me think about what will happen. In
the second section, the worm find the rose actually, and “his dark secret love
destroyed rose’s life.” The first thought I come up with is a young man take
away the girl’s chastity. The illustration about this poem also proved my
thought since girls become the rose’s leaves, and the worm eat the leaves up
left in the picture. It looks like the rose already dying; represent those
girls are lost them themselves in the dark secret love. The selfish and evil
“worm” destroyed the pure “rose”. It is interesting I come up with a second
thought after I read the poem on the illustration. Why does the “worm” look
like full of energy? He tried so hard to go up. In the opposite, the rose droop
her head on the ground, looks like decadent and lost. The girl in the middle of
the rose tried to hug something. Even if the “worm” represents some bad evil
things, does the rose one hundred percent pure? I doubt that. It made me think
about an old principle in China, there is no simply black or white in the real
world, most of things are gray. It reminds me that evil and foul exists in
everyone’s soul, the appearance of beautiful do not decide the inside good and
evil. I think Blake used those metaphors made us to think about the world and the
reality. It is always hard to find the essence of things. “The Sick Rose” leads
me to think more before I judge. If I want to find some realities, I need to
think as “gray” --- not black or white.
So
what is the reality of the world? Blake attempted to show us a sick society which
is “London”. “How the chimney-sweeper’ cry/ Every blackening church appals/ And
the hapless soldier’s sign/ Runs in blood down palace-walls.” It is the London
in the end of the 18th century. The angry, disappointed, and despair. Where is
the hope? What is justice? Who can protect us? The government and Royal only
cared about how to defeat other countries and get more and more wealth. How about
People? They did not even think about it. Except the governing classes, every
single man in this country is just a small accessory, nobody is irreplaceable.
Someone dead, other one will continue his work. Just like a machine, apathy and
cold. In the end of “London”, “but most, through midnight streets I hear/ How
the youthful harlot’s curse/ Blasts the new-born infant’s tear/ And blights
with plagues the marriage-hearse.” The harlot, which is the lowest class in the
society, nobody care about them. They sold their body to exchange bread. No
hope, no future, no happiness. It is hardly to say they are still completely
human beings after all these sufferings. The body and soul are already fragmented
for a long time. Does the religion will save those young lives? No, false
religion would only tell us those young women do not worth to save. The city is
sick. When I watch the illustration of “London”, there is an old man in the
middle of the top of the picture. I have to say it is the best way to describe
a sick city. He was already sick and old, but he still thought he was good
enough to walk to the future. However, the future does not need a sick old man.
It is the reality of the world Blake underwent. He located at a timeline the
world started change. Old things became decayed, laws already obsolete, no
freedom and rights, and war destroyed everything. Those complicated and
struggled moods we can never feel anymore. It is the confusion of an era.
People lived in 18th century could never image one day we selected
president by vote.
Now,
I already saw a sick ugly society from “London”. I am wondering there is hope
exists in the “Songs of Experience” Then I found this particular poem that I
really want to discuss which is “The Tiger”. It was a power that broke the
world of the “Songs of Experience”. Blake used his words to describe this
powerful king of the beasts. “Tiger, tiger, buring bright/ In the forest of the
night/ What immortal hand or eye/ could Frame thy fearful symmetry?” Blake used
this part twice to describe tiger. I keep ask myself why he did this. Does this
fire and the tiger inside his body? Does the fire burn all the dark into light?
Destroy or reborn? I believe Blake was also struggled about “the tiger”. When I read this poem, the hot feeling
occupied my mind. What is the tiger? Just an animal? I have to say most of time
tiger symbolizes power. After I read the poem I keep thinking why Blake gave us
a vivid picture of the tiger. The whole Songs
of Experience tried to describe a cold, cruel and depressing world; a tiger
seems like do not belong to this world. I keep thinking about the tiger and I
come up with a roughly idea --- this tiger means revolution. The fire and the
tiger made me felt the violence and the heat only revolution can bring to this
world. Yes, follow the tiger and fight for our human rights and freedom. People
will reborn from the revolution. If we suppose the illustration is a small world,
we can see the tiger burned the whole world (the whole poem is on fire in the
illustration). After the revolution the sky is still blue, but the cost of
revolution damaged the whole society. Wait, I thought the revolution is the
best way to solve the sick “London”. Why Blake said “Did he who made lamb make
thee?” Who is “lamb”? The tiger had such strong power, but how to use it? The
more I know, the more I do not know. The question come back to the beginning of
my essay, how to judge “the tiger is good or bad.” I think Blake stand by the
revolution in the beginning, then he finally realized revolution would destroy
a country. Revolution killed thousands of people, numerous people lost their
family. After the revolution, the city was heavily damaged. Did revolution
really a good way for people to find their future? Blake also felt uncertain.
There is not only “tiger”, but also “lamb”. I mean this is the charming part of
Blake’s poem that we can never find an answer directly.
The
contradictions and complexities always exist. Mark Schorer provided a new
version to me. He attempted to describe the relationship between tiger and
lamb. “The innocent impulses of the lamb have been curbed by restraints, and
the lamb has been turned into the tiger”, and the new animal “bursts forth in
revolutionary wrath.”(250) David
Erdman extends
Schorer's argument into Blake's own historical context. Erdman is careful
"not to imply the "The Tyger" is a political allegory," but
finds ample political resonance in the contemporary events of France and
America. But the poem culminates in the fifth stanza when the
counter-revolutionary "stars threw down their spears" like the
surrendering armies at Yorktown and Valmy, long at their wars (in the American
and French revolutions, respectively), and "seemed ready to coexist with
the Lamb." The cycle is complete, when "the wrath of the
Tiger"-- both revolutionary and counter- revolutionary-- "done its
task."(84) These people believe the lamb will finally realize they
need to fight for themselves, and weakness could not help them. So there is an
evolution from lamb to tiger. The revolution is a task, it needs to be done.
Since I live in a peaceful and stable world after those revolutions for
hundreds of years, I can see the damage was recovered. So I can say those
revolutions actually helped the world go to a right direction. Although there
still are bad things happened, but it is already a much better world than Blake
underwent. If we choose to chase for the perfection, everything became
meaningless. The only reason we keep progress is we are imperfect creature.
Revolution is not only an end, but also a start.
Works cited.
Schorer, Mark. William Blake: The Politics of Vision. New York: Henry Holt and Company, 1946.
Erdman,
David. The Illuminated Blake Garden City, New York: Anchor Press
Doubleday, 1974.
Since this was late, I'm giving very brief comments. Despite some mechanical problems (you should go to the writing center before submitting next time) your language is often poetic. Your individual thoughts on Blake are often quite good, but you needed to put more effort into clarifying and developing the argument as a whole - the essay as a whole isn't as good as its best parts.
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